all the yellow birds of autumn

autumn tree top

 

A gust of wind tears
yellow birds and russet butterflies
from autumn trees

or, possibly:

A gust of wind
tears all the yellow birds
and russet butterflies of autumn
from their treetop perches

Author: don't confuse the narrator

Exploring the boundary between writer and narrator through first person poetry, prose and opinion

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