A story in the Metro caught my eye today:
One paragraph in particular leapt out:
Tam Fry, of the National Obesity Forum, said: ‘What we desperately need now is a properly worked out plan which will start to reduce this enormous problem that we have got. The cost is going to be so huge if the figures are not reduced.’
I think what he meant to say was, “what we desperately need now is a proper work out plan that will help these enormous people reduce their huge figures.”
don't confuse the narrator 
Possibly reduce their use of calorie related adjectives as well? I hear they’re fattening.
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But a generous scattering of adjectives does help increase the word count, doesn’t it?
G’luck with this year’s NaNoWriMo!
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The solution is obviously to sack this Mr Fry and replace him with Mr Healthily-Steam.
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Heh. Indeed.
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