A gust of wind tears
yellow birds and russet butterflies
from autumn trees
or, possibly:
A gust of wind
tears all the yellow birds
and russet butterflies of autumn
from their treetop perches
all the yellow birds of autumn
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don't confuse the narrator 
nice penning!
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Thanks!
(And sorry about the delay – your comment got binned by the filters by mistake.)
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