We laze in jasmine-scented waters
while stainless steel appliances
fart us into relaxation.

white jasmine close up
As usual, it’s a fragment rather than a hai’ku. You can read more such pieces here on the blog, or check out my multimedia collection Poems from the Pueblo: haiku and assorted fragments. (The link takes you to the publisher’s video on Vimeo).

Author: don't confuse the narrator

Exploring the boundary between writer and narrator through first person poetry, prose and opinion

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